@Love_Wolf ~ Some friendly constructive criticism... This work would have been better served by not showing Sadako's eyes at all. One of the subtle(r) methods of instilling the feeling of Horror that is Sadako, is that you essentially never see Sadako's eyes (hair covering them); or, for the brief instance(s) that you catch a partial glimpse, Sadako's eye-sockets are empty, or just matte-black voids.
Hope this helps if you ever do another Sadako-themed work. :)
Another masterpiece of yours LW. By the way, do you have a plan to continue your old content on your new program? Like zombie attack, biome, locked room, etc.?
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Hope this helps if you ever do another Sadako-themed work. :)