If you accept some suggestions...try using some background sound (music, sex sounds, etc.), feel empty like this...and more important...Slow down a bit, it goes way to fast, i'm not talking about more scenes, is nice as it is, but let them run a bit more (from 5 to 7 minutes of full video to say something)...otherwise, is a bit hard to "enjoy" it :S
Other than that, is not bad at all, needs some improvement, but not bad :3
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Awesome position ends at 3:51 D:
Went by too fast!
Other than that, is not bad at all, needs some improvement, but not bad :3