This is better but instead of using sound effects from other porns it's better to probably just keep incorporating some sound effects from the game, then also include a (Sexual) sound effect for what's going on; like in this situation it's scissoring.
The models face is kinda weird when it gets to POV mode imo, it makes kind of an awkward look and lastly I'd say the camera movement.
It's best to keep the camera in different angles with no motion to it, just have it viewing the scene in different angles at different intervals.
This is just my opinion but other than that you have really well put together models, good fluid animation, and great quality! I also love the lesbian stuff it's great too :D!
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The models face is kinda weird when it gets to POV mode imo, it makes kind of an awkward look and lastly I'd say the camera movement.
It's best to keep the camera in different angles with no motion to it, just have it viewing the scene in different angles at different intervals.
This is just my opinion but other than that you have really well put together models, good fluid animation, and great quality! I also love the lesbian stuff it's great too :D!
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