just a loop...

3) 3rd person would be better than 1st

2) it was dark making it difficult to see what was happening

This is good but three things let it down 1) I hate rats so the skeevers a big turn off

There was nothing brutal about this but the freaking music lol.. when you say brutal think of darklustsfm or animopron or desiresfm this was not close to being anything..

This probably isn't for everyone ~