Good job for a first attempt ^_^. I'd say the one thing I noticed that would help alot and it wouldn't require much effort, is when the moans get really load at the cumshot scene, try turning the volume of that sound effect down so it doesn't have a really high spike that kinda hurts the ears. But good job none the less.
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Sound/Music edition: me xD